-Even though I did not receive feedback on my last video, I can definitely say that an area that needed improvement was making the video straight to the point. Another point of improvement is that I got to show two types of adapters that my prototype is being based off of (but improved). Another point that I would change is describing everything in less than 90 seconds just because it is very hard to do so. Overall, these pitches are very hard to make because you have to explain everything in less 90 seconds and be very professional without stopping or stuttering which is something I did a lot of in my last elevator pitch.
Hey Laura! Great video. I also needed to make my video more direct and to the point. It’s great that you could recognize that on your own and fix it. I agree that making these pitches are difficult because we want to be excited and eager about our product while staying professional and under control. I believe with more practice both of us can be pros at 90 second pitch videos! Great job
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